Cool work Randall!
I like it +10

I like your style man!

Perhaps a bit more cropping on the top
of this image would be even better

Nice going

+ 9

Really like this! Cool style. Agree that it could be cropped a little at teh top. Great vespa!

This is so cool, great colors and I love the pose. I agree with Andy on the cropping thing and a good solution to the blank background could be a strip of color behind her. +5

Sweet character design and rendering. I really adore the tattoo on her back/side. I think Berliner's idea for a colored stripe would hit the spot, adding a splash of color without distracting from your character. Also, maybe a tiny bit more shading on her foremost arm near the elbow for extra depth.

P.S. Cute shoes. Where can I buy a pair? ;p

10+

maybe crop it there is alot of white space.

very nice

very good, nice and simple...

Excellent one! Simple, clean and appealing! Very well done! Adding a green frame would fit it very well IMO
+10

awesome work! I love the girls you render! great style

mmm... shes kinda hot! great work!

great stuff! she's definately hot! tatooed girls… how i love 'em

Agree with them gr8 work............


+10

cool

Cool work!!! very nice ^^

another great work!!

very very nice.

some crits.

first - the inside of the vespa - the area under the handlebars. you need to create some reflection there from the body. remember its smooth and shiny so there will be some sort of shadow and relfection.

second - the shadow on the back of the vespa. its needs something there as well - its far too smooth and the specularity doesnt look convincing.

third - her back pockets seem to be out of proportion - it doesnt seem to following the contour her buttocks.


what did this do? it really captured my attention man. great job with the entire anatomy, volume, and colour pallete. im really really jealous.

excellent work

great

She's spiceY!

woow very cool character design i like it colours and concept. +10/10

The hair is just WOW! Great Work . But isn't the front wheel turning right, but the steering points straight ahead

I like your style. Although she looks a lot like an emo girl to me, and I don't think they are much the type to be on vespas. Awsome picture = max points

Wow, great design, love the colors, the expression and well.....everything.

Agree about the corpping though, it bothers me a little.

Niiice! real niice!! beautiful linework and great design too. Love her hair!

i love it, +11

m...love that ass

Superb... This can be a good selling cartoon character...